Caught between lines of changing pressure
a windblown eye abandons its veil.
Look, petals are falling
all around a half-hidden heart.
Look, the weathervane is spinning
pointing out directions that have never existed.
Image by jdgumby via Poefusion
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Wednesday, April 02, 2008
Windblown Eye
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free verse,
image,
poetry
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4 comments:
This is so good--love the "weathervane...spinning/ pointing out directions that have never existed."
Sometimes my life feels like that.
as always the visuals are perfect.. i too like the last two lines...
Tiel this is absolutely beautiful. And, I think most everyone at some time in their lives feel there is no direction in life. I too love the last lines and this as well, a windblown eye abandons its veil. Have a nice day.
mmmm, sweet, i love these images
you are certainly prolific! strong work overall!
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