The door’s off its hinges and a mean breeze
toys with the crumpled notes on the floor.
A plastic bottle reading Sierra Spring
rolls across the table, but it’s empty—
she used the last water to wash her
dirty handkerchiefs and socks. It leaves marks
in the dust like the tracks of a hockey puck
caroming off the walls of the rink
like her thoughts off the inside of her skull.
The room is so full of unreadable heiroglyphs
she can’t find anything to write. Unhinged,
empty, dressed in ironic labels, she strikes
a sad note. And the wind keeps on with its
unending paper chase. It’s a rough draft.
--for Poefusion
Collection available! Knocking from Inside
Friday, May 09, 2008
Rough Drafts
Labels:
free verse,
poetry,
wordpower
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3 comments:
Tiel, I'm impressed. You can take anything thrown at you and write something with it. I rather enjoyed reading this one. It reminds me of entering an abandoned house and the breeze following me inside. Nice job. Have a nice day.
Great use of a wild assortment of prompt words.
Blessings,
Linda
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I like stanza 3, its perfect.
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