In my dream the rosebush had climbed into the oak
and all the blossoms were standing on the limbs shouting
but they were not blossoms, they were the beating hearts of children
giant plastic strawberries
a constellation made up of a thousand stars as red as Antares
uncut garnets the size of your fist
they were snappers standing on their tails and gesticulating
and one by one they fell from the tree for it was now winter
and bare boughs
framed gray sky.
--for Writer's Island
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Friday, June 13, 2008
Loss of Color
Labels:
free verse,
poetry
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5 comments:
I enjoyed this piece.
What an amazing fantasy! I read it several times to let it flow over me. Magical!
woohoo!!! great poem.
I too read it a couple of times, and I'm glad I did - I got so much more from readng the second time
Very nicely done I love how vibrant this dream was and then how it turned to grey very cool.
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