Is this what they call happy-ending:
when lovers unite with a kiss
with streamers of moonlight descending—
is this what they call happy? Ending
the story? There’s so much more. Mending
the things that life makes go amiss,
that’s what I call happy. Not ending
when lovers unite with a kiss.
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Thursday, June 19, 2008
Romance After Marriage
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9 comments:
So true... the kiss is only the beginning :)
A wonderfully-crafted triolet! Delicious, really!
I like that. mending, ending, descending . . .
moonlight descending - great phrase
A Fairy Tale
mending - not ending!!! --- as it should be for love to have happy lovers - i like your thoughts here!!!
ending is the beginning.
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Sam's wife
A skillfully crafted triolet that expresses a universal truth. As usual with your poems, the phrases are lovely - moonlight descending.
A skillfully crafted triolet that expresses a universal truth
excellent form poetry... thrz such a rhythme to form that allows the words to sprout wings and fly with wisdom..
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