My tongue grows heavy with foul fizzy brews,
brain half-poisoned with bitter resignation,
cold cups of coffee and bottled desperation,
a hot shot of envy in a glass of bad news.
Pour me some more of that bad-time booze—
heartbreak hops and fever fermentation,
traces of flavor disappeared in translation
in the broke-down city of the red-black bruise.
Just when we thought we had nothing left to lose
troubles that bubble like over-carbonation,
long-gone problems come back out of solution.
Bent by sewer gas, choked with crepitation
bloodstream boulevards run with retribution
in the broke-down city of the red-black bruise.
--inspired by Poefusion's title, "Your Tongue Grows Heavy From Foul and Fizzy Brews".
Collection available! Knocking from Inside
Tuesday, September 16, 2008
Bad-Time Booze
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
1 comment:
Ooh this is so good. It sounds bluesy and shows well what goes on behind the scenes of drinking. Love this bloodstream boulevards. Well done, Tiel, well done. Have a nice day.
Post a Comment