Spring made promises she didn't keep
and summer burned your heart to sullen embers.
You found no consolation in November's
preparations for the time of sleep
but here I am at last, the year's renewer
come to claim my due and give what's owed.
I'll take the chestnuts careless squirrels sowed
beneath the trees that every year grow fewer,
the hedge of headless roses, withered weeds
a garden full of sticks that once were herbs
where now the gardener's careless tread disturbs
a leaf-pile full of worms and centipedes.
And if the living months have caused you pain,
I offer the solicitude of rain.
Collection available! Knocking from Inside
Wednesday, November 26, 2008
The Solicitude of Rain
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10 comments:
Wow! A remarkable poem on so may levels, rhyme, naunce, beauty. Almost out of a bygone century it seems, one of works of the romance poets :) I love it :)
Ya Haqq!
Such a soulful and fulfilling poem,
I'm blessed to have read this.
Thank you.
Another professional-quality poem! Smooth rhymes.
This is wonderful - It's NW winter by poem!!
mostly your poems make my soul sigh
I really, really loved this! The voice of Winter is a powerful one.
I like your referring to winter as "the year's renewer"
Beautifully written.
this is a moving and beautiful sonnet
Blog hopped my way here.
After reading a number of your entries, I find your poetry pieces as remarkably amazing. :)
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