For 3 Word Wednesday: Caress. Jagged. Ruthless.
gentle ocean waves
caress jagged coastal cliffs
ruthless erosion
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Wednesday, January 28, 2009
Ruthless Erosion
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9 comments:
Makes one long for warmer days, the ocean and the etched cliffs. Hope all is well with you. Have a nice day.
i like the imagery this conjures. great use of prompt and haiku form!
Those words brought the same image to us. I did a very similar haiku. Nice! The picture is there.
Wonderful imagery in such a tight package.
Amazing, you and Tumble seem to have contacted the same muse.
Ahhh...thank you for helping me to visualize the beautiful ocean on this bleak winter's day. I loved the imagery this evoked!
It always amazes me when someone fits the three words into a haiku so effortlessly!
I'll be posting a new prompt on TOP Saturday night.
I may have to stop coming here for 3WW. It is clear that you can write real haiku, unlike the lighthearted drivel I spit out. Put yours side-by-side with mine and it would be like Lawrence Olivier standing next to the Marx Brothers.
I knew there had to be more haiku around!
Nice play with the words.
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