It wasn't really like that, was it?
The ocean groaned and heaved in tidal suck and shove
while you floundered blind toward your first breath
and wailed when the cold air struck you.
Your mother rocked you in her arms--
once, too briefly--
then tucked you sleeping in a giant shell
and abandoned you on the doorstep of the land.
Collection available! Knocking from Inside
Saturday, April 11, 2009
Botticelli's The Birth of Venus
Labels:
free verse,
poetry
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5 comments:
Quite musical. I can see someone being dumped out into the world.
Nostalgic n moving.I'm from the poetry train.Visit me too.Pls do.
Yes I like your take on the birth of Venus, more down to earth!
The words and mood were powerful and larger than life, just like Venus. You captured that perfectly. Great read!
Like the last line!
Pablo Neruda rewritten
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