Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Vignette: Pride and Prejudice

Vignettes are not supposed to be
discursive. They shouldn't veer off
into self-indulgent doldrums or irrelevant paeans—
they should be twisted tight as a torniquet,
unnecessary flesh excised.

He's debonair and saturnine, wears
the sobriquet "Olivier" easily. She's a bomb
hidden under an Austen-patterned parasol.
Their colloquy is punctuated
by vulpine yowls.

twist; tourniquet; debonair; paean; discursive; vignette; veer; excise; parasol; doldrums; sobriquet; vulpine; yowl; colloquy; saturnine; bomb

--words courtesy of Read Write Poem
Collection available! Knocking from Inside

3 comments:

Raven's Wing Poetry said...

Nice use of the words! Excellent write.

-Nicole

irenet said...

Love your creative use of words!

Wayne Pitchko said...

wow...I could never use words like this...very good indeed