3 Word Wednesday: Depart. Ignite. Rotten.
rotten wood ignites
rising smoke dissolves in wind
old ghosts departing
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Wednesday, April 28, 2010
Purification
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8 comments:
An excellent haiku, very vivid. I can almost smell the smoke rising.
Beautiful. A good way to excorcise the ghosts.
What a beautiful haiku!
The image of smoke dissolving and becoming a parallel with ghosts departing is both powerful and challenging!
Beautiful haiku. Powerful imagery.
Three lines of such beauty!
you are such an artist - this wonderful small poem that creates such a huge picture.
Wonderful haiku !
-Tim
http://timremp.blogspot.com/2010/04/hiram-grange-devils-dancers.html
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