And he thinks of the days when the fish were real
struggling in the net, then fading
on the drying sand. He remembers the clean salt smell
and silver scales clinging to his hands.
He remembers taking them from a sack
one at a time, dried and stiff with salt. Handing them
to hungry people in that famine time.
That day he pulled in a net heavy with hearts.
He rubs his fingertips together, feeling
for the slime on fish bellies, the grit of desert sand
or the tautness of salt. There's nothing now
but calluses from pulling nets
and the memory of miracles.
--image from Magpie Tales
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Thursday, May 20, 2010
Once a Fisherman
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free verse,
image,
poetry
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26 comments:
Wonderful poem about vital memories.
Lovely visuals-I can hear the sea and smell the salty fish
The apostles as fishermen? That is what I heard. Great tale TAA.
QMM
Your Magpie touches all of our senses ... good job!
Beautiful...reminds me of "The Old Man and the Sea"
Wonderful! I could feel it...and smell it!
So vivid - almost like being there
strong theme, story and memories throughout. nicely written. have a great night.
What a powerful theme. And your words echo the lifelessness of the metal fish so well.
gorgeous interpretation - felt so real!
Your poetry lives breathes and has movement... beautiful!
I see by your side bar you will be in the Portland bookstore in July I have to bookmark that for I live in the Portland area and would love to hear you read you poetry aloud.
Joanny
Lovely poem with a great last line.
That is truly wonderful.
This was just beautiful ... I could see every single image! Wow.
A fantastic picture in words, truly beautiful.
I loved that first verse and read it through and through and the last line too...the wonder of miracles. Very powerful writing.
Christine
Powerful imagery. You nailed a sad truth with amazing clarity.
Stunning!
was he a fisherman or is he a fisher of men?
I could see the scene...it filled my senses.
So vivid! You really captured the sense of touch, which is an odd choice, but the right one. Great job. I really liked it.
Nice~
Beautiful poem..so visual..memory of miracles..but the miracle of memory, too...
oh your magpie is beautiful...i was right there with him and feeling as if i missed those days...
This took me back to my younger days - when fishing with the men in my family was exciting.
lovely
Really great poem. It leaves me with a longing feeling.
Your poem is vivid and lovely.
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