A key made of iron
a key made of agate
a key made from hummingbird bones
a triple-locked casket of cold alabaster
in a sandalwood cabinet in a palace of embers and smoke
surrounded by gardens of vegetable stoplights of green turn to yellow turn red
Waiting for hands gloved in velvet
waiting for hands gloved in steel
waiting for hands that can carry a pen or a lute
in search of a captive or wealth beyond dreaming
in search of a story with scenes of escape and adventure
a fish with a ring in its mouth and a cat with a bell on its handwoven collar
And if they don't make stories like they used to then we have to write our own
and we'll start with clues inscribed inside a walnut shell
and a key embedded in a ripe tomato
and a road map in a sidewalk crack
a key made of music
a key made of moonlight
a key spun from spider-silk and silverfish scales.
--image courtesy of Magpie Tales
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Thursday, July 08, 2010
Three Keys Waiting for a Fairytale
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free verse,
poetry
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19 comments:
The poem rings with wondrous fairytale magic! And "vegetable stoplights" is a very clever idea! Beautiful!
Just kill me I can't handle how lovely it is.
a key made of moonlight
a key spun from spider-silk and silverfish scales
Magical!
I just love this ..it rolls around in my head so nicely
I loved the imagery of the 'garden traffic'...
"surrounded by gardens of vegetable stoplights of green turn to yellow turn red
Waiting for hands gloved in velvet"
I imagined a busy and blooming victorian fairytale garden.
This is gossamer with magic and I didn't want it to end. I want more.
Elizabeth
so many lovely keys
nice writing
what a magical magpie...the repitition as well adds so much....loved it.
fantastic tale...now you must write the rest of the story...about the keys, about the moonlight and about the silverfish scales....lovely...bkm
"...a key spun from spider-silk and silverfish scales."
Are you a long lost descendent of Omar Khayyam? For you certainly write in the lovely way that the old philosophers did. Clues inscribed in walnut shells?
Please write a full length fairytale!
Such wonderful imagery in this piece. :-)
Heavens, that's the most beautiful thing I've ever read.
Classic Magpie filled with images of Wonder!
This is lovely. I really enjoyed reading it :)
I love the magic in your words.
Loved this one especially. My husband likes to refer to me as his iron fist in a velvet glove. I never thought of it in tomatoey terms!
classical and beautiful tale.
love the rhythms of the poem!
Yes, we still need fairytales! I love the intriguing keys, and the tomatoes appearing around the corners.
You found the key to my heart..fantasy!! Splendid..
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