Do you see it in this photograph
awareness of approaching doom?
Do you see it in his eyes that look ahead:
the no-return journey on a no-ticket train
one of so many travelers on that trip.
So many who left less than this
this photograph
these eyes that look ahead.
Now held in a grandson’s aging hand
traveler, you still look ahead
and warn us with your eyes:
never, never turn your back
when smoke is rising from
the smokestack of a no-ticket train.
Whoever’s on that train is
your sister, your brother
and you will travel with them
you are traveling with them
traveling in the smoke of a no-ticket train
in the smoke from a giant oven fed with bones.
Image: photo of a Holocaust victim from BBC World News
Friday, January 18, 2008
Fellow Traveler
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free verse,
image,
poetry
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8 comments:
Profound. Provocative. Poignant. Powerful reminder that we truly are all on the train.
Excellent.
Very, very powerful!!
A chilling poem, with a very profound truth for the ages.
Well done!
A chilling, sober poem! I love that "no-ticket train" image!
That is so powerful. Truly powerful.
I love visiting you...You have an interesting, new way of looking at things and I always leave intrigued and thought provoked. You are a powerful poet...
Phew, a no-ticket train but they certainly had to pay.
Lest we forget!
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