Flivvers sputter black-smoke
fricative syllables
from uncleaned exhaust pipes.
Fledgling executive,
frowsily munching her
farl breakfast cake, mutters:
"Far too early for this."
--for Poefusion
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Thursday, September 18, 2008
Five-Thirty Traffic Noise
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6 comments:
Tiel, your first attempt at a Pleiades is a very good one. I enjoyed reading this. It makes me think of an executive who's in a rush to get to the office for an early meeting. Nice job. Have a nice day.
Your posts are always very imaginative.
Ah, I hear it!
Adore this "grumble grumble" beginning to a new working day! Lovely tensions!
Love it! It makes perfect reading..
What did ya call it?
Well that's my mornings :)
I love it.
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